Writing a song

I was inspired by the greatest songwriter in the history of Twinkie song writers, Dan . So i decided to try my hand at actually putting down one of the songs in my head onto paper. Most of them are in Spanish. Here's an English one. I really hope Dan likes him as I am only an amateur and he dear reacer is a professional. Really moving stuff too.

This song is a big kiss my ass song. Think Walk Away by Kelly Clarkson its got short lines and its sort of coppy with a kind of guitar influenced beat.

When you’re gone- July 26 12:20 AM
Face reality
Go on without me
Did you think you had a chance?

Polar opposites
Black and white
Not quite the makings for a great romance

Its kind of creepy Kind of eerie
To watch you obsess over me
I know I’m great you don’t have to say it repeatedly

Why don’t you just find someone new?
Someone who actually cares for you
Someone who won’t ignore you like I do
I know its hard to get over me
But I’ll be so damn happy
When you’re gone
When you’re gone

See you everywhere
See you stop and stare
Whenever I walk by you

You’re not invisible
I know just what’s going on
I know just what seeing me does to you

Its kind of creepy Kind of eerie
To watch you obsess over me
I know I’m great you don’t have to say it repeatedly

Why don’t you just find someone new?
Someone who actually cares for you
Someone who won’t ignore you like I do
I know its hard to get over me
But I’ll be so damn happy
When you’re gone
When you’re gone

Tell me once tell me twice
That you think I’m still so nice
I’ll be polite when you nervously say hello

I’m forced to go if you stay
I’ll still ignore the things you say
And let you sit alone and wallow
Just wallow

Why don’t you just find someone new?
Someone who actually cares for you
Someone who won’t ignore you like I do
I know its hard to get over me
But I’ll be so damn happy
When you’re gone
When you’re gone

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